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vinniejonez

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#63574 30-Jun-2010 11:08
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Hi everyone,

I created a webpage, it can be found here:

http://www.b-basic.com/kiwiradio/faq.html

I am wondering if there are language mistakes made in the page.
If so, I am glad to hear so because I want everything to be correct :)

Have a nice day!
Vincent - Kiwiradio.fm

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Phaedrus
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  #346595 30-Jun-2010 11:30
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Had a quick look at yer first page. A couple of grammatical errors (I'm a pedant I know!):

"most common (free) plug-ins is - should be 'are'..."

"the sound halters - should be 'falters' (I presume)..."

There's a few other things that, these days, are probably in the eye of the beholder. Punctuation for instance, I'd use comma's and full stops, as appropriate, at the 'end' of all your one-line sentences - not just some. Also I think "pc" should be 'PC' but maybe that's just me :-)

Now I've a question for you - what's wrong with VLC, will it not work as well as media player here? At least it's open-source and cross-platform...

Cheers, P.



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  #346597 30-Jun-2010 11:38
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Phaedrus: comma's

I'd try to use apostrophes correctly too ;) 

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  #346598 30-Jun-2010 11:45
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Behodar:
Phaedrus: comma's

I'd try to use apostrophes correctly too ;) 


, yeah, I'm a pedant alright, but not a perfect one that's for sure!

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