Batman:
hey geekstastic, sorry but i am not sure of what the issue is - is the scene too unrealistic or too realistic?
In those terms, too realistic I suppose. It seems like it's home movie footage inserted into a cinema film, if that makes sense. Not in the meaning that the footage is wobbly or amateurish, but in the sense that it feels too "I was actually there" rather than fitting in with the anonymous observer style that is more typical and to me more comfortable to watch.