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Shin: People like me who English is second language
BTW, how many grammar mistakes I had in this?
· Bad paragraph formation throughout (fragmented).
· Bad word order. “Although we have built in English dictionary in web browsers” should read “Although we have an English dictionary built into web browsers” (this one always kills me in other languages, so I can relate).
· “People like…” should be “For people like”.
· “People like me who English is second language” should read “People like me for who(m) English is a second language” (counts as 2!)
· “after higher education”. Meaning not clear (I won’t count this one).
· “while express” should be “while expressing”.
· “their thought” should be “their thoughts”, or “thought” i.e. while expressing thought (their is implied).
· “Couldn't write English correctly doesn't automatically proven the person is unintelligent.” I’ll count this line as one - the words, context & tense are jumbled. Should read “Incorrectly written English doesn’t automatically prove the person is unintelligent”, or more succinctly, “Poor written English does not prove low intelligence”.
· “I think it global”, should read “I think it is a global”, or ”I think it’s a global”, or ”It’s a global”.
· “young breaking grammar and spelling” should read “the young break grammar and spelling (rules)”
· “to understand 10 year old” should read “to understand a 10 year old”.
· “without much of imagination.”, should read “without much of an imagination”, or preferably ”without much imagination”.
· “grammar, they don't” Sentence should end, i.e. “So, please be open to others grammar. They don't do it”.
· “others grammar” possessive apostrophe needed, should be “other’s grammar” i.e. the grammar that belongs to others (like “kid’s posting”, above).
· “They don't do it deliberately but mere mistakes.”, should read, “They don’t do it deliberately.” (“but mere mistakes” should read “but make mistakes” but in this instance, the “but make mistakes” is redundant).
· “BTW, how many grammar mistakes I had in this?” should read “BTW, how many grammar mistakes have I made here?”
I’m sure the professional writers (and even the journalists ) among us could improve on that.
Damn, that's a lot of corrections. Just one thing...
rwales Post 2: ...things like possessive apostrophes trip most people up...
rwales Post 1: Even people who's mother tongue is English...
Wow... that's a lot..
I'm feel really lucky that I could get degree from NZ university even my grammar on English that bad.
Funny thing is that I was one of the best computer science student at that time.
Also, one thing I find a little bemusing is the number of people in England who murder their own mother tongue.
Now based in Perth WA.
Wob:Perhaps not as relevant in this medium, but pronunciation is my biggest pet hate. I returned to New Zealand after 11 years in Yurp to find that everyone in the country had forgotten how to pronounce "debut". Kiwis seem to love the word, and use it frequently, but it is not day-boo (sounds like a three year old having a bad morning).
Wob: I returned to New Zealand after 11 years in Yurp...
Now based in Perth WA.
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